My First Pitch


“Ummmmm, hi, I’m Ben Lang, I’m working on MySchoolHelp, which is a platform where students can find and share notes from their high school.” That was the opening line of my first pitch in front of investors, entrepreneurs and college students. As challenging as the process may have been, I can certainly say that it was one of the most exciting experiences of my life.

First Startup Pitch

Finding the event

While searching for tech events in the NYC area, I stumbled on an interesting event called the 34th Entrepreneur Roundtable. To tell you the truth, my partner and I weren’t actively looking for investors, but I thought this would be a good experience. It was free, close by and the timing was perfect. I filled out the application form and decided to give it a shot.

A week later, the event’s organizer, Murat, emailed me saying I had been accepted to speak.

Public speaking isn’t my forte. This was going to be my first speech since my Bar Mitzvah at age 13! I know how important speaking is as a skill, in particular for entrepreneurs. My reaction: game on. I knew that it would be hard work and nerve-racking for me especially considering that over 200 people would be in the audience. In any case, I had to do it to prove that I could.

Researching the audience

I found out that the audience would consist of entrepreneurs, investors and college students. I had to make sure it would be intriguing for the investors, engaging for the entrepreneurs and interesting for the college students.

Preparing the pitch

5 minutes: that was the maximum time for the pitch. Mine was supposed to be around 5 minutes but it turned out to be three minutes and ten seconds.
Writing the entire pitch took a lot of time and effort. I wanted it to be perfect. We decided to follow this format:

  • What is your business in one sentence?
  • Who are you and your team?
  • Why would people use your service?
  • What is the product? How does one use it? What is the business model? How do you make money?
  • Prototype? Launched? How many users? Revenue?
  • What are you looking for and what will you do with it? How will you get more users and grow the company?

Practicing

Originally, I thought that we would split the speech. We practiced over and over hoping we would be taken seriously due to our age and experience. We were the only high schoolers present. Luckily, we arrived an hour and a half early and had plenty of time to practice.
As soon as the organizer entered the room we asked him the one question we needed answered: could we alternate presenting the pitch? To our dismay, he said no. We tossed a coin and I ended up pitching, although he joined me for the Q&A session afterwards.

Delivery

To say that I was nervous beforehand would be an understatement. Fortunately, right after I started I calmed down and felt inspired. I may have said “umm” a few too many times but I truly believe in our idea and I think it transpired in my words. My biggest challenge was to speak as clearly and slowly and for the first time in my life I think I succeeded.

Networking

After the event, many people approached us to chat. Some knew of investors that would be interested, a few had questions and many just wanted to connect.

Aftermath

A week later, I asked the videographer to send me the clip. I posted it on YouTube and in a week it received over 150 views. Not as many as my eBay interview but a satisfactory amount. Now, whenever I’m sharing the concept of MySchoolHelp, I attatch the video as well.

Here it is in case your curious :)


Have you ever pitched before? Any tips or feedback?

  • http://kikolani.com/ Kristi Hines

    Nice job – I would be terrified if I were in the same position. Much more outgoing online than I am in person!

    • http://epiclaunch.com Ben Lang

      Thanks Kristi, I also was terrified haha.

  • Shonika Proctor

    Awesome Ben!

    You were just missing one thing that I noticed -

    At the beginning of your pitch you didn’t give them the impact # or question to wrap their brain around.

    They need something to really visualize what it is…i.e.

    Solve a problem – i.e. did you know that parents across the U.S. currently spend X dollars a year on tutoring services for their teens???

    Well my company has created a service that can help decrease those costs and also bring a more social aspect to the learning process….

    My School Help is a high school note sharing online community – then go into some of the benefits you spoke about in terms of the social piece etc.

    This is just an example. You know best what is the best lead in point.

    Good job!

    @teenbizcoach

    • http://epiclaunch.com Ben Lang

      Thanks Shonika :)

      That’s a great point, next time I pitch I’ll certainly start off with a question/impact #

      Really appreciate your advice, amazing like usual!

  • http://www.aisjournal.com Sajib

    I haven’t pitched before yet, but I’m considering to open up a site that will be focused on school and college students in the country I live in.

    What I’ve experienced so far (from others’ experience, of course) is that simple words are most powerful for pitches. Your pitch seems no different to me. Congratulations and good luck with your efforts.

    • http://epiclaunch.com Ben Lang

      Good luck, I’d love to see you do it.

      100% agreed, thanks so much.

  • http://www.findingthehumor.com Melinda

    Ben, you are just amazing. You did a fantastic job. Speaking in front of that many people is never easy…even to people that do it all the time.

    Remember us when you create the next big thing that knocks Facebook off its feet because we want beta-testing accounts. :) Best of luck to you as always. Keep up the inspiring drive and vision!

    • http://epiclaunch.com Ben Lang

      Thanks Melinda, I appreciate your kind words. You’ll be the first one with a beta account haha ;)

    • http://www.webuildyourblog.com Andrew @ Blogging Guide

      I agree with you Melinda… speaking in front of many people makes my knees weak all the time. But learning my audience helps me a lot to make it happen.

  • http://donpower.com Don Power

    Hey Ben!

    Your tone of voice and confidence leave no tell tale signs that you were nervous at all!

    Great job.

    Very proud of you and your accomplishments. I look forward to t day when I read your story on the cover of Forbes or Time magazine and I can say – “I know that guy!”.

    Cheers!

    Fortune favors the brave!

    - Don

    • http://epiclaunch.com Ben Lang

      Hey Don,

      I really appreciate that you think so. I look forward to that day also :)

      Hope all is well.

      Best regards.

  • http://www.omnificdesign.com.au/ Wes Towers@Graphic Design Melbourne

    Hi, Ben.

    What you did was admirable, considering that you are still so young and that this was your first time. I was way older than you when I first made a pitch like what you did and it was in front of college students. While I was terrified that time, I discovered that it gets easier (like you will) that it gets easier along the way. Of course, when you get older, you get to refine your pitch and you will get more confidence in speaking in front of an audience. So, everything will flow more freely.

    Here’s to more amazing pitches in the future! :)

    • http://epiclaunch.com Ben Lang

      Hey Wes,

      Thank you. I’m hoping it will only get easier and easier, I plan on gaining as much experience as I can. Good luck!

  • http://www.twitter.com/christopm Christopher

    Great article! Well done indeed. Keep up the good work.

    • http://epiclaunch.com Ben Lang

      Thank you Christopher!

  • http://www.megabizflakes.com Samuel

    This is awesome Ben! I’ve never pitch or speak on stage to people before. But I think I will have to embrace the courage when the time comes. Glad to know that you’re making progress :) wish you all the best bro!

    • http://epiclaunch.com Ben Lang

      Thanks Sam, the time will come when you need to ;) I’m sure you’ll do an amazing job.

  • http://clr.nu/ Casper Larsen

    Well I am a business man. You did an amazing job with your pitch. I think you answered most of the questions most investors have in mind. Thank you for sharing this with everyone, it is a good starting point for all those potential entrepreneurs out there.

    • http://epiclaunch.com Ben Lang

      I appreciate it, glad you enjoyed it Casper.

  • http://www.youngprepro.com Onibalusi Bamidele

    This is really awesome Ben,

    When reading through this post I was thinking about asking you to post the video only to scroll down and see it. I must commend your efforts. You really tried.

    I remember being called to speak in the Children section of my church regularly when I was young and sometimes called to speak with in main church with several hundreds of members. Speaking was very easy for me then and people cheer whenever I speak but after a long time of not speaking in front of an audience I do feel nervous whenever I try to speak – I’m beginning to realize it’s a matter of consistent practice and believing in yourself.

    Keep up the great work bud!

    -Onibalusi

    • http://epiclaunch.com Ben Lang

      Thanks Onibalusi. Yeah, would never let you down by not showing the actual video :) I’ll keep working on it and I hope you do too. Keep rocking.

  • http://www.kitchencabinetkings.com Anthony Saladino

    Hey Ben,

    Great job overcoming your fears and giving a clear well thought out presentation! I really appreciate that you provide the readers an inside look on your thoughts and feelings leading up the presentation – This will help other entrepreneurs gain the courage to step up to the plate themselves. I shared this article on my personal FB wall and will pass share on my company twitter account @CabinetKings.

    Kitchen Cabinet Kings – distributor of quality bathroom and kitchen cabinets on the Internet

    • http://epiclaunch.com Ben Lang

      Hey Anthony,

      Great connecting at the Under30CEO event. So glad you enjoyed this and shared it. Thanks!

  • Cec

    Another great business experience that you can learn a lot from. I’m also not so great at public speaking, I get nervous! Thank you for writing the post, I’m sure lots of people will benefit from this!

    • http://epiclaunch.com Ben Lang

      Awesome, you inspired me to write this, thanks for pushing me ;)

  • http://www.chatsroulette.com Chats Roulette

    This is a great idea Ben. I can definitely seeing this work.

    • http://epiclaunch.com Ben Lang

      I hope so, thanks!

  • http://feedity.com/rss.aspx/theanniversaryrose-com/UVZUW1VQ jasmine

    Good job Ben. Yes, I think this service will be the next “tutor” for any “free-loader” / “nerd” ;) Keep up the great work! Thanks for making our educational future brighter.

    • http://epiclaunch.com Ben Lang

      Thanks, I really hope so :)

  • http://www.womanzworld.com Natalie Sisson

    Did you get funding? ;)

    Having pitched before and worked on pitching I agree with Shonika. You have to get up there and hook them from the beginning with the size of the problem, build the pain point that people can relate to and then offer your solution.

    Also inflection in voice and varying your pace and levels of enthusiasm help – I think you’ve done a fantastic job and as many have said above it’s not easy to stand up and pitch and do it in 5 mins. Looking forward to seeing you on the front of Forbes too.

    Natalie

  • Cake Recip

    It will be great to see you succeed. I will be following you with interest.

  • niesha pierre

    i love it thanks ben