Persuasive Writing to Influence Outcomes


Do you ever get stopped on the street by punters trying to tout something?

I’m talking about those people who pounce on you offering a free drink in a bar, or desperately trying to get you to sign up to a charity where you pledge your firstborn son by mistake, because you didn’t read the small print. Because of ploys like this, people who come to your blog are naturally going to be wary as soon as they sniff out that you might be trying to sell them something. There they are, surfing about in their lunch hour, and all of a sudden you pounce like a tiger asking them to buy your services. Really, what they were looking for was a pleasant read to while away some time before going back to the grindstone.

Let’s face it, if they wanted you to provide a service, they’d ask you for it, right? So how in the world are we supposed to persuade people, and sell, without sounding like a desperate second hand car dealer? Here’s the low-down on some useful tips…

Be honest

There’s absolutely no point in trying to sell if you lose your readers at the first hurdle. People can spot scams or evasiveness a mile off, so don’t even try to pull the wool over your prospective customer’s eyes. A little bit of honesty goes a long way – if your product has a pitfall, outline it. Weirdly, this natty technique will aid your sale, rather than impede it.

Here’s an example:

“We are not the cheapest gardening service in the area. However, we mitigate this through outstanding service and attention to detail, meaning we are an economical choice in the long run.” Admit it – you’ve warmed to these guys already, right? There’s something really engaging about admitting weakness…and then mitigating it.

Offer something worthwhile

Price your products and services sensibly. Check out your competitors, and see what they are offering. If you can’t beat them on price, work out what you can add that sets you ahead of them. What makes your company unique? If you were your own customer, what would you be looking for? Work out how you can satisfy your customers with your proposition – and then deliver it.

List the benefits

Potential customers respond brilliantly to sales pitches that explain exactly what the features of the service or product are, and how it will enhance their existing proposition. Be very specific when describing your product. List features, and explain exactly how these features translate in to direct benefits. An example of this would be: “Hiring us to do your garden will save you time, which in turn allows you to generate revenue by focusing upon your business.” People like logic – show them how their lives will be improved through your service, and they will respond.

Make the decision-making process easy

Think about your proposition from the perspective of the customer. Detail exactly what you would want to hear, if you were making a purchasing decision. Be direct, and don’t overestimate your reader. They have a matter of moments to make a call – make those moments count by putting everything they need to know in front of them, succinctly.

Offer something for free

Everyone likes getting something for nothing. Persuade people to buy, by offering something for free. Most decent people feel morally obligated when they receive something for nothing, and yet everyone likes a bargain. It may sound cynical, but cash in on this sense of obligation by offering a service which leads naturally on to a purchase of some kind.

Don’t push too hard

Your readers will instantly become alienated if you hammer the point home too hard. Take it steady when it comes to the hard sell – people are capable of making their own decisions. All you need to do is outline the benefits of your proposition, and let them work the rest out for themselves.

Acknowledge other options

There is something charming about the disarming honesty which leads people to acknowledge their competitors. The chances are, people who purchase from you are aware of the pros and cons of other options – don’t be afraid of acknowledging them, as it will let your reader know that you are aware of your market, and your own place within it.

So how in the world do you persuade people, and sell, without sounding like a desperate second hand car dealer?

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  • http://www.making-your-own-website.com Nabeel | Create Your First Website

    Wow. What a great article. I would buy (pay) for this article any other day ;)

    Seriously, it outlines the main points about selling.

    “Weirdly, this natty technique will aid your sale, rather than impede it.”

    This is so true. This is just like people admitting to their faults/weaknesses. Do we take it as an offence or do we have a higher respect for the individual?

    Also, treat you visitors like you would be be like to be treated yourself. Take them by the hand. Make it simple for them.

    Nabeel

    • Andrew @ Blogging Guide

      Nabeel,

      I’m glad you like the article and I like what your say, “Make it simple for them”.

      This is so important. As a blog owner you really need to spell out what you want your customers / visitors to do when they come to your blog…then make it easy for them to do it!

      Andrew
      .-= Andrew @ Blogging Guide´s last blog post: Blogging Advice: Top 10 Errors In Blogging =-.

  • Dennis Edell | Direct Sales Marketing

    Acknowledge other options… I thought it was brilliant the first time I saw the new Progressive commercials where they talk about comparing rates with other companies – and, say straight out they are not always the cheapest.
    .-= Dennis Edell | Direct Sales Marketing´s last blog post: Name My Blog Network – Win $10 or Ad Space! =-.

    • Andrew @ Blogging Guide

      Dennis,

      I worked for an insurance company who did exactly that and it took me a while to get my head around it. Why point your visitors to competing companies?

      But it does make sense. It’s like going into a shop and they say, “You can get what you are looking for over at xyz”.

      Andrew
      .-= Andrew @ Blogging Guide´s last blog post: Blogging: Who’s Made It Work? =-.

      • Dennis Edell | Direct Sales Marketing

        Exactly. The one thing you hope for, is xyz doing the same thing. lol
        .-= Dennis Edell | Direct Sales Marketing´s last blog post: 6 Blogs – 6 Blog Themes. All the Same or All Different? It’s a Branding Issue… =-.

        • http://www.webuildyourblog.com/ Andrew @ Blogging Guide

          Yes, very true!

          Andrew
          .-= Andrew @ Blogging Guide´s last blog post: How To Sell Your Product Online =-.

  • http://www.venturemixx.com Tony Ruiz

    They say the best price is “FREE” – When offering something “FREE” or a “Bonus” people feel like they got a deal instead of being sold too. Its always great when you purchase and you know you got hooked up with a deal! Great post

    • http://www.webuildyourblog.com/ Andrew @ Blogging Guide

      Tony,

      And make sure the FREE / Bonus ‘gift’ is of a high quality.

      My view is if the bonus could be sold on it’s own then it should be a great bonus. I see so many bonuses which are just not worth having.

      Andrew
      .-= Andrew @ Blogging Guide´s last blog post: blogging guide =-.

  • http://www.treatguides.com KS Chen

    Hi Andrew! Nice to meet you here! Again, this is your another nice guest post! I totally agree with you that most of the people likes freebies. If we can offer some freebies to them, it will be easy for us to sell our service. At least, they are willing to listen to us. Thanks for your nice sharing! :)
    .-= KS Chen´s last blog post: Monday Blogging Amoeba – 14/6/2010 =-.

    • http://www.webuildyourblog.com/ Andrew @ Blogging Guide

      Hi KS,

      Nice to see you here too!

      One of the first things I get my clients to do is create a quality ‘freebie’ to start building their lists.

      Andrew
      .-= Andrew @ Blogging Guide´s last blog post: Blog Writing =-.

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  • http://www.murlu.com Murlu

    Transparency is such a large part of the web today. We all got so tired of being burned by older websites but finally many are opening up to letting it all out – something I personally really appreciate.
    .-= Murlu´s last blog post: 7 Tips For Better Copywriting =-.

    • Andrew @ Blogging Guide

      Murlu,

      I think things have progressed so much over the last couple of years. Everyone was trying to sell something that these days you can get for free.

      Andrew
      .-= Andrew @ Blogging Guide´s last blog post: Blogging Advice: Top 10 Errors In Blogging =-.

  • http://myentredex.com Martin

    Oh wow. I just read several articles regarding the same concern. I was just about to make the usual way of offering people what I can give them. This blog made me realize that there are a lot of ways that are more effective of selling your product. Thanks!

    • http://www.webuildyourblog.com/ Andrew @ Blogging Guide

      Martin,

      I’m glad you found it – at the right time!

      Andrew
      .-= Andrew @ Blogging Guide´s last blog post: Blogging Advice =-.

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  • Jane

    Hi Andrew

    At first I did not understand, what your talking about, but in a long run I got it. And I can compare myself of those people you are talking about. Before I sell everything in the street, begging for those who have lots of money to buy my products, for some reason I need money to support my family. But now I already sell online. You’re right, your article helps me a lot. Shiloh Street